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Sunday, August 24, 2008

Hello!

As my english is sucks, so i asked weili to help instead.
This what the message is about.

Netball is a game with combination of great teamwork and stamina. Every player on the court counts and each player takes great responsibility and effort to play.

Over these 4 years, the girls have been through all the tough trainings and of course the tough times without the proper training of the coach. Despite these difficulties, the girls trained very hard and managed to come in second place in the National Healthy Lifestyle Campaign Under 17 Tournament. They also took part in the Inter-School South Zone Tournament and Pesta Sukan Carnival. Going through all the ups and downs with the great leadership of our captain FengYing, the girls managed to grow stronger bonds between each other. Not forgetting the seniors who came back to train us and our teacher-in-charge, Mdm Chng, thanks a lot. Lastly, from our captain, remember "Once you choose to play sports, you cant stop playing it." Onwards Netballers!

OR

Netball is a game with combination of great teamwork and stamina. Every player on the court counts and each player takes great responsibility and effort to play.

Over these 4 years, the girls have been through all the tough trainings and of course the tough times without the proper training of the coach. Despite these difficulties, the girls trained very hard and managed to come in second place in the National Healthy Lifestyle Campaign Under 17 Tournament. They also took part in the Inter-School South Zone Tournament and Pesta Sukan Carnival. Going through all the ups and down as a team, the girls managed to grow stronger bonds between each other.Not forgetting the seniors who came back to train us and our teacher-in-charge, Mdm Chng Chee Hoon, thanks a lot. Lastly, from our captain FengYing, remember "Once you choose to play sports, you can’t stop playing it." Onwards Netballers!

OR

This one is from yongjia

Netball is a game that combines great teamwork and stamina. Every player on the court counts and each player plays an important role in the game.

Over the 4 years, the girls have gone through tough times, including trainings without a proper coach. The girls press on with their tough trainings and were rewarded for their hard work when they came in second in the National Healthy Lifestyle Campaign, Under 17 Tournament. They also took part in the Inter-School South Zone Tournament and Pesta Sukan Carnival. Medals aside, the friendships made and strengthened over the years have been the real gains. The girls would like to thank the seniors who took time off to come back to coach and motivate us. Also, we would like to thank our teacher-in-charge, Mdm Chng. Lastly, from our captain Feng Ying,
remember "Once you choose to play sports, you can’t stop playing it." Onward Netballers!

The sentence in red is the part that is edited.
Please tell me which one will you girls prefer by tonight.

Any comments or wanna amend the message, msn/text me.
if not i gonna submit to mdm chng tmr.

Lastly, remember to stay back after school this wedesday for phototaking.
Wanna wear Netball shirt? or just school uniform will do?

Thankyou.

Fengying

(NETBALLERS) ♥ 1:45 AM